Not as good as Kiwicamera

Went out with a friend this afternoon to enjoy the sunshine and look for a blip. After admiring many of kiwicameras water blips and original photo's I've decided to ahve a go at mastering this water stuff, so here's an average attempt at capturing running water. kiwicameras blip today is I might add better.
This is up a valley called the Tutaki. Hadn't really gone prepared for climbing over hill and dale so Couldn't get as close to the water as I would have liked