This works.

Saw a better sky today so retook the hotel photograph.

Again it's hdr (not gonna deny it) but I think it's a good one because it doesn't scream hdr. The sky comes out at you but doesn't dominate, there are no tell tail ringing artifacts from the hdr process, and the colours are just right and actually toned down a bit.

The only thing spoiling the photograph is that so****g camper van.