Sketching a name plate

In the blip you can see two sketches for the name plate of Villa Tyven that will be cut into steel and attached to a big block of stone by the house.

A's sketch is in the foreground and mine at the back. The number will be left out, since it is a bit too difficult to be incorporated to the name.

A felt insulted when I commented on his version that it looked like a 60s ad. His comment on mine was that it was unclear, impossible to read. Let's see if we manage to amalgamate the two - or come up with a totally new one instead.