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Tried this after reading a chapter in one of my books.  I didn't have a nude figure to hand and woody wasn't up for it!  so I tried with a photo of my hand.  I think I have over blurred it but I have spent long enough on it, so here is my attempt.  Would love some ideas on how to make it better!  Maybe blurring the background?

B joined Ro and myself for coffee after mass and then the two of us went for a walk.  Weather grey and more grey and we cut short our walk as it started raining and the umbrellas were useless due to the wind.